- Absolutely obsessed with the prose, especially page 3 para 1 “…made by people who just wanted to remember and be remembered.” that line is my favorite in the story
- How far in the future after humans have died out/evolved is this story taking place? Is it realistic that humans would be a myth, especially with record keeping, technology, etc?
- Would love to see Stephan’s job explained a bit more, I feel like that could really help elevate him as a character
- The hands on the wall on page 4 was a great addition to the story. Could perhaps make it more emotionally charged to readers if it is assumed by Stephan to be a family or something like that
