- Your prose, yet again, is my favorite thing
- Pg 2 para 3 “They had gotten lost in each other, and were beginning to bring out the worst in each other.” I love this line, it really encompasses the toxicity in codependent relationships
- Was Asher okay with her seeing Noah? It seems like her spending so much time with Noah would have set Asher and his codependency off
- I love the way you formated this, especially pg 4 when Sophia told Noah she was single
- Pg 5 ” Late night stargazing, long boarding, drives, and shared songs – SO many shared songs. Songs that felt like being sent to another dimension, one where only the two of them existed.” I love that music is one of the things that brings them together
- Uh oh Sophie is leading him on…. I don’t like that 🙁
- The ending kind of reminds me of La La Land. Like the idea that someone was right for a little while but they were never meant to last, just a companion to figure out the hard stuff
- Sophie is a little selfish isn’t she? She doesn’t understand that turmoil that she put Noah through and now she’s upset that he might not miss her so dearly as she misses him
