- Love the characterization of Alex and the slow deterioration of their mental state but there still being an underlying sense of hope throughout (albeit a tiny amount at the end) was very well done
- Some parts were a bit slow and over-explained (like the opening paragraph we discussed in class) so maybe go through and cut out some frivolous parts
- I think the presence (or lack thereof in the end) of Percy and the dialogue between him and Alex portrays Alex’s subconscious thoughts really well
- Maybe give a bit more backstory of the Atlas mission so we understand what lead to these circumstances
- The ending was super well done, I really thought it wrapped everything up well and gave good closure
