- I like the time jump and how you gave us the location
- I like how absolutely enthralled the narrator is with Gwen, she is definitely a girl boss
- Pg 5 second to last para ” These movements were familiar. So familiar that memories began to creep into my head. So many bodies. Some of them were dead. Some were just knocked out. I didn’t know any of them, but one face was stuck in my head. A young boy, only about 16. He was in our way. He saw what we did. They made me knock him out. I haven’t seen him since, but his shocked expression followed by the sweet calm of sleep wouldn’t leave me.”
- I really like this paragraph. It gives us more of a look into the narrators head and how she has trauma from her past
- The narrator refers to Gwen as “the love of my life” and “my love” quite frequently so it gets a bit repetitive
