- When is this supposed to be taking place? I like the old-timey vibes a lot
- Is it realistic that two men would be able to dance with each other without fear of gossip?
- I like the bickering between Finn and Jonathon. They can’t stand to be together but can’t stand to be apart either
- The time jumps are good, but I feel we need some more tension because of them
- I wish we got more of a look into Finn’s thoughts and feelings post-accident
- I feel like Finn and Jonathon got to forgiving each other and being chummy a bit too quickly. I was expecting a bit more of a slow burn
- Is there something more between these men or is it strictly platonic?
- pg 5 last para ” With that silly smirk and sharp face and his eyes—well, his eyes might be nice if they didn’t belong on his irritating face!” This kinda screams he has a crush but doesn’t realize it
