- Again, your prose is absolutely beautiful. I am obsessed with they way you describe things
- pg 1 “Fur weaved through Adelaide’s fingertips like a tendril of shadows if darkness was made of silk as she gently stroked her hand along her rabbit, Pistachio’s, long, floppy ears.”
- pg 5 “She missed the smell of his leather-bound books and sitting in his lap by a peaceful fire while he looked down his long, aristocratic nose at paperwork”
- I love the flashbacks. They help us understand where Adelaide is coming from emotionally
- The theme of pistachios is really cool and well thought out. I like how it is present throughout the story
- I think the ending was done super well! I understand why Addie would have overthought the whole situation but there is no way a kid like Heather would have come from parents who would act so harshly to a child
- I wish we had a bit more interaction between Addie and her mother. Seeing the contrast between them in the beginning was great and then we had Heather bash her a little bit but I want to know why she is the way she is
