- I think that Sammy and Brooke as characters play off of each other really well
- Pg 3 second para “Sammy placed her right hand on Brooke’s shoulder keeping her eyes on the road, eyes that were holding back tears of their own.” I love this moment of intimacy between Sammy and Brooke
- I love the moment that they changed their hair. Its a bit of a cliche like new hair new beginnings but its a cliche that I personally adore. I do wish we had gotten more of an emotional reaction form them because of the hair change though. It feels like you could flesh out that scene a bit more
- Where do you think this story is going to go? I am hoping for some drama and police chases or something
- This is very superficial but just try to fix the typos and spacing errors and weird capitalizations
