- I like how you started the story. It really set the tone and warned us of what was to come
- It is certainly difficult to love someone with addiction, I can understand the ups and downs that the couple went through but the solid love between them that persevered
- You portrayed the trauma of her going back to the house really well
- Pg 5 last para: I love the idea of the gifts under the pillow. Its certainly not pertinent to the story line but it really helps us to characterize Liam
- Pg 7 para 2: Why the hate for many years if it had only been 10 months since it happened?
- I love the ending, especially having “Here Comes the Sun” playing, I think that is a super cute connection to it all
- I do wish she would be heartbroken for a bit longer. I know grief is not linear but I can’t image that she would be completely fine after reading that letter. I know I would be an absolute mess
