- I love all of the descriptions you gave of the setting and scenery
- Tessa’s anxiety surrounding Peyton is very believable
- Pg 3 second to last para “That face, those eyes, those beautiful ocean blue eyes that I love and hate so much. That face of his is burned into my mind whether I like it or not.” I really like these lines, I think they encompass Tessa’s conflicted feelings very well
- Peyton seems like such a male manipulator kinda guy- very yucky
- The ending was very well written but I was so rooting for Tessa to call Peyton out!!!
- I really like how you wrote the argument between Tessa and Peyton, I feel like there was a lot of toxicity, perhaps from both sides but obviously mostly from Peyton, and that toxicity was evident in his constant shutting down and minimizing of everything that Tessa said
- I wish we got more anger from Tessa’s friends about Peyton. If they knew about the bottle incident and Tessa needing to go to the hospital I feel like that would make them less likely to welcome him back into their friend group
