- I absolutely adore your prose. It makes reading your story so enjoyable
- Was it all a fever dream? or was it a vision? Is there supposed to be some sort of magical/mythical element to this?
- I love how you describe how the main character starts to feel more like themself the less the humanistic restraints are shed away
- This feels very cerebral and I love that
- I wish we got a bit more of an explanation for everything but I also can appreciate if you’d prefer to leave things up to interpretation and want the reader to perhaps delve into themselves and their inner thoughts in the same way that the main character did
