- How old is Barrie?
- I think you captured the feeling of hopelessness really well
- I really like how Delilah’s extroversion plays off of Barrie’s more introverted tendencies
- The cafeteria scene is very heartwarming and a good look into their friendship and the hope that Delilah brings to Barrie
- Pg 11 para 2: I think this is a very good portrayal of the feelings that Barrie would have in that moment
- This story is giving “The Fault in Our Stars” vibes and I mean that as a compliment
- I kinda feel like she may have clung onto that hope a little too quickly. Barrie, in my mind at least, feels like the kind of person that would find more comfort in grief and sadness than in comfort, even though Delilah was such a strong catalyst of hope
