- I am absolutely obsessed with your prose. It’s dramatic and borderline pretentious but in the best way possible
- Pg 2 para 2 “As I got older, I stopped poking fires and started igniting them.”
- I feel like the plot gets a bit lost in the prose. Some people may find it difficult to stay engaged
- This story confused me a bit. I feel like there was so much real estate covered in the beginning that didn’t quite pertain to the ending
- I really enjoyed Molly’s voice as a character. I think her way of thinking is something that perhaps some may people may be able to relate to
