- Kind of has screenplay vibes and I am really digging it
- How were they able to drive so many hours longer without getting gas?
- I like the bond between Boston and Summer. They have gone through so much together and that is really clear in the writing
- Pg 6 ” ‘Boston, do you want me to go in with you?” Summer asks. “Yes.” Is all that Boston can say.”
- I’m not sure that how Boston’s dad reacted is completely believable. He seems a little bit too calm and familiar with Boston than what I would expect for someone who had been absent from his life for so long
- I like how you had Boston’s drinking habits connect him to his father but not in an outright way, just with the bottle opener and his thoughts
