- I love the banter that the two easily get into right off the bat
- There is a lot of mentioning of Jennifer’s blue eyes. I understand it is her defining feature but it gets a bit repetitive
- Jay’s flirtatiousness plays off really well with his inner monologue that is full of nervous energy
- You start the story out with Jay saying he remembers the first time he fell in love and it is in reference to Jennifer but he also says that he was in love with his high school girlfriend. Perhaps this is a bit of nit-picky thing but that makes the story feel a bit off to me
- I love how both of them seem to be on the more hopeless romantic side
