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Month: December 2022

Feedback for Mia 2

Feedback for Mia 2

I am loving these vibes Watch out for switching between past and present tense Absolutely adore the name Theodora Pg 4 “We were instantly PrestonandTheo- one word, and he always came first; that should’ve been the first clue.” I love this line I’m obsessed with your prose Theo is a girl boss!!! Is it realistic that the concierge would set all of this up for Theo? I LOVE THE ENDING such a good message I think Preston deserves to be…

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Feedback for Alex 2

Feedback for Alex 2

Would Reyes realistically be able to function that well if a bullet went through and severed “bone, muscle, and tendon”? We need more background. I think it’s hard to get into the story at first when we jump right into the action and everything is moving a mile a minute We love a girl boss Why does Penny stay with Reyes if her job puts her in constant mortal danger? I kind of love how Reyes is toxic but in…

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