Feedback for Mia 2
I am loving these vibes Watch out for switching between past and present tense Absolutely adore the name Theodora Pg 4 “We were instantly PrestonandTheo- one word, and he always came first; that should’ve been the first clue.” I love this line I’m obsessed with your prose Theo is a girl boss!!! Is it realistic that the concierge would set all of this up for Theo? I LOVE THE ENDING such a good message I think Preston deserves to be…