Feedback for Alex 2

Feedback for Alex 2

  • Would Reyes realistically be able to function that well if a bullet went through and severed “bone, muscle, and tendon”?
  • We need more background. I think it’s hard to get into the story at first when we jump right into the action and everything is moving a mile a minute
  • We love a girl boss
  • Why does Penny stay with Reyes if her job puts her in constant mortal danger?
  • I kind of love how Reyes is toxic but in a hopeless romantic kind of way
  • The ending is very sweet but I lowkey was hoping for a tragedy
  • I’m a bit confused as to why the opening paragraph is necessary?
  • I like the way that Reyes’s voice comes through in the narration

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