Feedback for Mia 2
- I am loving these vibes
- Watch out for switching between past and present tense
- Absolutely adore the name Theodora
- Pg 4 “We were instantly PrestonandTheo- one word, and he always came first; that should’ve been the first clue.” I love this line
- I’m obsessed with your prose
- Theo is a girl boss!!!
- Is it realistic that the concierge would set all of this up for Theo?
- I LOVE THE ENDING such a good message
- I think Preston deserves to be bullied
